十年上海中考英语作文2011 年上海中考英语作文题：Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“I'mamemberof”.以“我是~的一员”为题写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格子。提示：你可以作为任意兴趣小组或者社团的一员，或者作家庭，班级，社区的一员，写出你的经历，感受等。Usethefollowingpointsasareference.Areyougladtobeamemberof……?Whatdoyoudoinit?Howdoyoufeelassuchamember?例文+点评：Ithas 口 2 sincEIbEtamemnnEmber of t hegroup"AnimaIIthasbeen+E 寸间段+占泊甜+过去的时间点inwhich 丨 fmelandproudofrpyself -Notonly非限定性定语从句 Notonly...but 自 IM 倒装句，用法请参见我蔑他的帖子dowecollectinformationabouttheanimalsind 日ngerbutwealsoposttheinformationontheinternet.In addition ,weoftenspend 逻辑词ourweekEndworholidaystakingphotosofthosebeaut 讦ulanimals.Itisinthiswaythatweattractmorepeopletoloveandprotect 强调句animals.IhadneverfoundmyworksomeaningfuluntilIjoinedthis 耳roup,NevE 「 will 丨 耳 itoutofit. (95w)Never 的倒装句2010 年上海中考英语作文题:I'mproudofmyself1、Whatkindofpersonareyou?2、Whatmakesyouproudofyourself(Giveanexample/examples)3、Whyareyouproudofyourself?要求：至少 60 字范文：Iamaboyoflessconfidence.Ialwayshaterunning.Butasweallknow,ThestudentsofGradeninehavetotakepartinthesportsexam.Atthatmoment,Ijustwantedtogiveup.butmyparentsencouragedme:“impossibleisnothing,”“youcouldchallengeyourself!”sowiththeencouragementofthem，,Itriedmybesttorunandinsistedonrunning.WhenIgottothefinishingline,Ifeltproudofmyself,thoughIdidn'tgetthegoodmark,Iknew,Iwon.IcreatedamiracleformyselfandIwassoproudofmyself!满分作文+点评：Likethosemanyteenagersyoucanseeinthestreet,Iamjusta定语从句commonstudent,nothingdifferent.Iamstillproudofmyself,however,forIamtryingtogetbettereveryday.Earlytobedand活用谚语earlytorise,Imakemyselffullofenergyalldaylong.IseldomwasteanyminuteduringthEclasses,whichhelpsITEtobehighly非限定性定语从句effidintwhilEstudyingBesides,Ialsokeepmyselfhealthyby省略句takingexerciseeveryday.Tosumup,InevergiveupimprovingEAby 曲隔孔通过做吕事达...
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