CommunicationWorkshopEventsinMylife7:30a.m.May24,2004SCHOOLCLASSROOMGoodluckinthereadingcompetitionOh,Ihaveforgottenit!PracticeatnoonCOMPETIONINTHEAFTERNOONFailedinthegameUpsetthewaterAppreciatethecompositionsandthinkaboutthefollowingaspectswhilereading.Thinkabouthowthewriter:●attractstheattentionofthereader.●showstheorderofevents.●sharesfeelingswiththereader.●usesvividlanguagetomakethewritingmoreinteresting.HowthewriterattractstheattentionofthereaderMay24thwasabadday.Thedayeverythingwentwrongwasmay24th.May24th,2005willliveinmymindforever.HowthewritershowstheorderofeventsBecausetheschoolbusdidnot…First,Ihadtowait30minutesfortheschoolbus…ThedaystartedtogowrongtheinstantIlefthome.Atschool,Mr.fan…ThenextproblemhappenedwhenIarrivedatschool.Butthetroublewasonlyjustbeginning.WhenIgotintobedthatnight,I…ThelastproblemofthisterribledayhappenedwhenIgotintoEventhen,mytroubleswerenotover.AsIgotintobed,…HowthewritersharesfeelingswiththereaderThiswasabigmistake!…andyoucanimaginehowIfeltbythetime.Whataclumsyendtoanawfulday!HowthewriterusedvividlanguagetomakethewritingmoreinterestingItwashotandtiresome.Thedaywashotandtiring.Thesunwasalreadyboilinghot…Mr.fan,theEnglishteacherremindedmeofthe…Thissurprisedme…Mr.fan,theEnglishteacher,alargebutfriendlyman,gavemeanastysurprise.Heremindedmeinhisloudvoicethat…AsIclimbedupthestairstotheclassroom,Iheardaboomingvoicebehindme.Ifeltawkwardandhadtolookdownatmybookduringthecompetition.TherewasonlyalittleapplausewhenIleftthestage.TherewasnotimetopracticeatlunchtimeandIreadfrommybookinsteadofrecitingthepoems.AsIleftthestage,therewasonlysomequietapplause.IwasnotsurprisedwhenIcamelastinthecompetition.Itried,andfailedtopracticeduringthelunchbreak.Theresult?Icouldn’trememberanyofthepoemsandhadtokeeplookingdownatmybook.ThemoreIlookeddown,thereddermyfacebecame.Ifelttenseanddizzy.WhenIleftthestagepeopledidn’tapplaudveryloudlyanditcameasnosurprisethatIwaslastinthecompetition.layoutintroductionbeginningofthenarrativeconclusiondevelopmentofthenarrativeWriteaboutamemorabledayoreventinyourlife.
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