镇江新区大港中学赵德俭CreatingaTVdramascriptIntroduceyourfavouriteTVprogrammes;somehintsforyou:MyfavouriteTVprogrammeis….(Ilike….best.)Ithinkitis…(Ifindit….)Fromit,Icanlearnalotabout…MillieiswritingaTVdramascriptforacompetition.Readthroughthefirsthalfofheroutlineandanswerthequestions.（background，story）1.Whowasthestoryabout?2.WholivedinHillBuilding?3.WhydidSarahsendamessagetothetwins?Thetwins,JustinandLuke.TheirfriendSarah.Shewasaskingforhelp.ThereweresomeburglarsinHillBuilding.4.Whatdidthetwinsdoatonce?5.Whatdidthetwinssee?6.Whathappenedtothetwins?Buthowdidtheytrytodo?Theycalledthepolice.Theysawthreemeninpoliceuniformscomingoutofthebuildingwithgunsintheirhands.Theywerepushedintoaminibus,buttheytriedtouseaknifetoopenthebackdooroftheminibus.Millieiswritingthefirsthalfofthestory.Helphercompleteit.Oneday,thetwins,JustinandLuke,were(1)________.Theyreceivedamessage.ItwasfromtheirfriendSarah.Shewasaskingfor(2)_____.Thereweresome(3)________inHillBuilding!athomehelpburglarsJustinandLukecalledthe(4)_______atonce.Thenthey(5)_____toHillBuildingquickly.Whentheyarrivedthere,theysawthreemenin(6)_______________comingoutofthebuildingwith(7)______intheirhands.policeranpoliceuniformsguns"Theyaren’tpolicemen.They'retheburglars,"thetwinsthought.Theyrantowardsthethreemenandtriedtostopthemfromleaving,buttheywerepushedintoa(8)________.JustinandLuketriedtoopenthebackdooroftheminibuswitha(9)_______.minibusknife1.Thetwinssawthreemeninpoliceuniformscomingoutofthebuildingwithgunsintheirhands.(1)seesb.doingsth.E.g.WhenIcamebyhisdesk,Isawhimsleeping.(2)With+宾语+宾补，伴随状语，表伴随E.g:Ourteachercamein,withabookinhishand.///asmileonhisface.2.Theyrantowardsthethreemenandtriedtostopthemfromleaving.他们向那三个男人跑过去试图阻止他们离开。stopsb(from)doingsth表示“阻止某人做某事”。相当于:preventsb(from)doingsth.keepsbfromdoingsth.e.g.Thegovernmentshouldstop/prevent/keeppeoplefromcuttingdowntrees.政府应该阻止人们砍伐树木。Tipsforwritinganoutline:1.定background：time，place，characters，cause2.编story：development---turningpoints---resultAppearanceDialoguesActionsThoughts…CatchattentionYouarealsointerestedincreatingyourownTVdramascript.Writeanoutlineofyourstoryfirst.UsetheoutlineinPartAonpage90asamodel.WritingyourownTVdramascript:Background:lastFridayintheartlessonyou,classmates,Mr.WuStory:whathappened?howdidyou///Mr.Wudealwithit?what’stheresult?1.定：人称，时态2.列：提纲，段落3.写：字迹，间距4.查：n单复数，v时态与结构，word拼写…5.Highmarks:连词，句型多样化Finishthewritingtask:课时作业本P127MyfavouriteTVprogramme.
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