Unit6DesignSectionⅦWriting——描写你梦想中的房子[写作技法指导][文体指导]本单元写作任务是描写梦想中的房子。描写梦想之屋时，通常要包括这样一些方面：梦想之屋的类型，梦想这样的房屋的原因、位置，还有描述它的形状、大小、材料、结构、内部设施、功能、独特特征，对这个梦想之屋的评价等。当我们描写梦想之屋时，常常要包括以下步骤：1．梦想之屋的类型：宫殿、木屋、别墅……，并说明理由。MydreamhouseisasmallwoodencottagesothatIcangetclosetonature.I'dlikeabigvillaformybigfamily.2．梦想之屋的位置：在市中心、郊区、乡下……Thehouseshouldbelocatedonthecoast.I'dlikeahouseinthecentreoftown.3．梦想之屋的特点：形状、材料、颜色、风格……Thehouseismadeofstone.Itisverybigandmodern.4．梦想之屋的内外设施、配备家具、组成部分。Treessurroundthehouse.Infrontofthehouseisaswimmingpool.Itisequippedwithfinefurniture.5．对梦想之屋的整体评价或结束语。Thatismydreamhouse.Thedreamhouseisreallypleasant.[亮点句式]1．Itlookslike.../Itislike.../Itisbig/small...2．Itis...long/tall.../Ithasanareaof.../Itcovers...3．Thereis...init./Ithas...4．Itismadeof.../Itisconstructedwith.../...isusedtobuildit.5．Itisconvenient/easy/goodfor.../Itprovides.../Itmakes...[满分佳作构建][写作任务]请以“MyDreamHouse”为题，根据下面的提示写一篇作文。1．位于绿树之间的一座两层楼的大房子；2．一楼是个大客厅，有舒适的沙发和电视；3．最主要的房间是楼上的起居室，有很多家具，如书架等；4．屋顶有太阳能帆板(solarpanel)，供应洗澡和学习；房子有特殊材料，冬暖夏凉；5．喜欢住在这样的房子里，因为设计的既节能又环保。注意：1.词数100左右；2．不要逐句翻译。[审题谋篇]体裁描写性说明文时态以一般现在时为主主题梦想中的房子人称以第三人称为主结构第一段：简单介绍自己的理想房子第二段：房内外环境第三段：表达自己的感想[遣词造句]Ⅰ.对接单元词汇1．locatev．位于2．electricityn.电3．furnituren.家具4．bathev.洗澡，沐浴5．providev.供应，提供6．comfortableadj.舒适的7．energysavingadj.节约能源的8．environmentfriendlyadj.有利于环境的9．specialmaterial特殊材料10．alargetwostoreyhouse一座两层楼的大房子Ⅱ.巧用单元句式、语法(一)完成句子1．我理想的房子是一座两层楼的大房子。Mydreamhouseisquitealargetwostoreyhouse．2．它位于绿树之间。Itislocatedamonggreentalltrees.3．一楼是个大客厅，有舒适的沙发和彩电。OnthegroundfloorisabighallwithcomfortablesofaandcolorTV.4．最主要的房间是楼上的起居室。Themostimportantpartinthehouseisthesittingroomsupstairs.5．楼上的起居室有很多家具，如书架，书桌等。Inthesittingroomsupstairsthereisalotoffurniture，suchasbookshelvesanddesks.6．屋顶有太阳能帆板，供应电能以便洗澡和学习。Ontherooftherearesolarpanels，whichcanprovideelectricitytoletmebatheandstudywith.7．房子还有特殊材料。Thehousealsohasgotspecialmaterial．8．房子冬暖夏凉。Itiscoolinsummerandwarminwinter.9．专门设计既节省能源又环保。Itisspeciallydesignedtobebothenergysavingandenvironmentfriendly．(二)句式升级10．用过去分词作定语合并句1和句2Mydreamhouseisquitealargetwostoreyhouselocatedamonggreentalltrees.11．将句4和句5合并成含有定语从句的句子Themostimportantpartinthehouseisthesittingroomsupstairs，wherethereisalotoffurniture，suchasbookshelvesanddesks.12．用sothat改写句7和句8Thehousehasgotspecialmaterialssothatitiscoolinsummerandwarminwinter.[妙笔成篇]【参考范文】MyDreamHouseMydreamhouseisquitealargetwostoreyhouselocatedamonggreentalltreeswithalargegardeninfrontofit.Itisspeciallydesignedtobebothenergysavingandenvironmentfriendly.OnthegroundfloorisabighallwithcomfortablesofaandcolorTV.Themostimportantpartinthehouseisthesittingroomsupstairs，wherethereisalotoffurniture，suchasbookshelvesanddesks.Ontherooftherearesolarpanels，whichcanprovideelectricitytoletmebatheandstudywith.Thehousehasgotspecialmaterialssothatitiscoolinsummerandwarminwinter.Iwouldliketoliveinsuchadreamhouseforever.谢谢观看
