肇庆一模肇庆一模基础写作基础写作审题审题文体：文体：时态：时态：写作内容：写作内容：11、讲述自己的经历、讲述自己的经历WhenIwasyoung,______________________WhenIwasyoung,______________________22、建议：、建议：多沟通多沟通学习玩耍同样重要学习玩耍同样重要自己能管好自己自己能管好自己33、这样做的好处：、这样做的好处：信过去时，现在时Icanunderstandhowyoufeel类似经历，怎样解决，结果怎样communicatemorewithyourparentsStudyandplayarebothimportantYoucandealwithyourownbusinesswell.信任，有自由信任，有自由DearDavid,DearDavid,Icanunderstandhowyoufeel.WhenIwasIcanunderstandhowyoufeel.WhenIwasyoung,Iyoung,Ihadthesameexperiencehadthesameexperienceasyoudo,butasyoudo,butafterItalkedwithmyparentshearttoheart,weafterItalkedwithmyparentshearttoheart,wehadabetterunderstandinghadabetterunderstandingofeachother.Sotryofeachother.Sotrytocommunicatewithyourparentsoftentolettocommunicatewithyourparentsoftentoletthemknowthatstudyandplayareboththemknowthatstudyandplayarebothimportant.important.YouarewiseenoughtoYouarewiseenoughtodealwithdealwithyourownbusinesswell.Don’tyouthinkthatallyourownbusinesswell.Don’tyouthinkthatallparentsintheworldlovetheirchildrenevenparentsintheworldlovetheirchildreneventhoughtheyaresometimesstrictandserious?thoughtheyaresometimesstrictandserious?I’msurethatI’msurethatyourparentswilltrustyouandyouyourparentswilltrustyouandyouwillenjoymorefreedom.willenjoymorefreedom.Ihopemyadviseisofsomehelptoyou.Ihopemyadviseisofsomehelptoyou.任务型写作任务型写作第一步：审题第一步：审题写作内容：写作内容：11、以约、以约3030词概括短文内容；词概括短文内容；22、以“对父母的、以“对父母的感谢感谢”为题，写约”为题，写约120120词短文词短文11）你认为子女是否应该对父母表示）你认为子女是否应该对父母表示感谢感谢并指出原并指出原因；因；22）你通常以怎样的方式对自己的父母表示）你通常以怎样的方式对自己的父母表示感激感激。。写作要求：写作要求：11、可以参照不得抄袭；、可以参照不得抄袭；22、题目自拟。、题目自拟。thankfulness首先写标题第二步：第二步：3030词概括（找主题句，关键词）词概括（找主题句，关键词）关键词：关键词：主题句：主题句：TheGuangzhouChildren’spalaceand…publisheTheGuangzhouChildren’spalaceand…publishedtheresultsofsurveyabouthowchildrenandpadtheresultsofsurveyabouthowchildrenandparentsviewthankfulness.rentsviewthankfulness.84%ofparentsthinkthattodaymostchildrendono84%ofparentsthinkthattodaymostchildrendonotfeelasenseofthankfulnesstowardtheirparenttfeelasenseofthankfulnesstowardtheirparents.s.MostchildrenthinkthatbeingthankfulmeansrepaMostchildrenthinkthatbeingthankfulmeansrepayingthosewhohavesupportedthem.yingthosewhohavesupportedthem.NokidsthinkthatbeingthankfulwassomethingoutNokidsthinkthatbeingthankfulwassomethingoutofdate.ofdate.概括时注意语言的简练和概括性；不能照搬照抄。概括时注意语言的简练和概括性；不能照搬照抄。thankfulness,parents,childrenthankfulness,parents,childrenThesurveyshowsusThesurveyshowsusthedifferentthedifferentviewsbetweenparentsandchildrenviewsbetweenparentsandchildrenonthankfulness.Mostparentsdon’tonthankfulness.Mostparentsdon’tthinktheirchildrenarethankfulthinktheirchildrenarethankfultowardthem,towardthem,whilewhilechildrenthinkchildrenthinkthankfulnessisimportantandathankfulnessisimportantandameanstorepaythosewhohavemeanstorepaythosewhohavehelpedthem.helpedthem.第三步：120词（提纲）过渡句1、我们是否应孝敬父母，原因（生我们，养我们，教我们……)2、怎么样孝敬。...
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