概括方法对于故事类记叙文，我们应首先找出故事的主角，然后找出该主角(何时何地因何原因或出于何种目的)做了何事，再弄清结果如何，以及该故事说明了一个什么道理或给人有什么启示。其中“某人做了某事”是最主要的。在写作过程中还注意以下几点：(1)时态应与原文时态一致。(2)一般以第三人称的形式来表述。如I要变成Thewriter,he/she等。(3)可选用以下句式开头。Thepassage/storyisabout...Theauthortellsusastoryabouta...Thepassageisastoryabout...注:由于字数限制为大约30个词，我们也不一定要使用Thestorytellsus之类的开头语。超级模板(不一定都适合,仅作参考)(1)Inorderto...sb.didsth./sth.happened.Asaresult/Therefore,...(2)sb.didsth./sthhappened./whichshows...dueto/thanksto/because(of)...whichshows...主题1：诚实才是上策1.Theauthortellsastoryabout(某人)aChinesestudentwithanexcellentacademicachievementwho(做某事)couldn’tfindajobinGermany(原因)becauseofhisstealingridesatthesubway,(启示)whichshowshonestyisthebestpolicy.(2011广州一模)2.(某人做了某事)Theauthorhappenedtopickanumbrellaonabusandtriedtofinditsowner.(结果)Shewaspleasedtofindtheownerandalsogotajobofferedbytheowneroftheumbrella.(1)Someyearsago,leavingthefarmtoworkinthecity,threebrotherswereemployedbythesamecompanyandonthesamepay.Butthreeyearslater,theyreceiveddifferentwages.Sotheirfatherwasconfusedanddecidedtopayavisittotheboss,whotoldhimthathewouldlethissonsexplainforthemselves.超级仿写:概要写作Thethreebrotherswereaskedbythesupervisortogototheairporttogetacargoinventoryatdifferenttimes.Jim,whoreceived500dollarsamonth,gottheinformationonthephoneinsteadofgoingtotheairporthimself.Frank,the1000dollarsamonthbrotherwithalistofmorecargoes.George,the1500dollarsamonthbrothercamebackwithdetailedinformationandalsodidsomethingextrawithoutbeingtold.参考答案：(某人做了某事)Threebrothers,whoworkedforthesamecompany,receiveddifferentwages(原因)duetotheirdifferentattitudestowardstheirwork,(意义)whichshowsarightattitudeisofgreathelptoone’slife.(2)Ihiredacarpentertohelpmerepairanoldfarmhouse.Afterhejustfinishedatiringdayonthejob,aflattiremadehimloseanhourofwork.Worsestill,hisancienttruckrefusedtostart.WhenIdrovehimhome,hesatinstonysilence.Onarriving,heinvitedmeintomeethisfamily.Aswewalkedtowardthefrontdoor,hestoppedforashorttimeatasmalltree,touchingthebrancheswithbothhands.Whenopeningthedoor,hisbrownfacewascoveredwithsmilesandhehuggedhistwosmallchildrenandgavehiswifeakiss.Aftersupper,hewalkedmetothecar.Whenwepassedthetreeandmycuriositydrovemetoaskhim,“Beforewewentin,whydidyoustopbythetree?”“Oh,that’smytroubletree,”hereplied,“IknowIcan’thelphavingtroublesonthejobandinmylife,butthosetroublesdon’tbelonginthehousewithmywifeandchildren.IcanhangthemuponthetreeeverynightbeforeIcomehome.Butitturnedoutthatthenextmorningthereweren’tasmanytroublesasIrememberedthenightbefore.Putdownourworriesforamomentandwewillberelievedforever.”参考答案：Inordernottoworryhisfamily,(某人做了某事)hedidn’tbringhistroublehome,andtohissurprise,heforgotthetroublethenextday.(启示)Therefore,weareadvisedtoputdownourworriesandrelieveourpressure.在记叙文中常用oneday,atfirst,then,later,afterwards,soon,before,after,when,while,assoonas,since,during,eventually,atlast,finally,intheend,immediately等表示时间顺序的连词或连接性词语来叙述故事发展的先后或做某事的过程。篇章润色：记叙文的语篇连接词1.用atfirst,then,afterthat,finally填空。Ihadabadcoldlastweek._________,Ihadarunningnose,butIdidnottakeitseriously._____Ibegantocough._________,Ihadafeverandfeltweak.________,Iwassenttohospitalandhadtolieinbedforthreedays.即时练习FinallyAtfirstThenAfterthat2.用then,later,afterthat填空。Iboughtamobilephoneon20thApr.2008.Tendays_________,itdidn’tringandsendshortmessages._____Itookittotheseller,butwastoldthatthemodelhadbeensoldoutandIhadtowaitatleastthreemonthsforanewone.______Iwenttotherepairman.LaterafterthatThenThenextday,wesetoffearlyinthemorning.Whileclimbingthemountain,weenjoyedthewarmsunshineandabeautifulview.However,whenreachedthetop,wewereshockedtoseelitterhereandthere,suchasbottlesandbananapeels.Thenwestartedtopickupthelitter.Afterwards,weputtherubbishintothenearbyrecyclingbinandnon-recyclingbinrespectively.语篇范例用finally,immediately,atfirst,oneday,then等填空。Thenaughtyboyinthestory“TheBoyWhoCriedWolf”hasgrownup.Nowheworksasaweathermaninhisvillage._________hestudiedtheweathercarefullyandfoundthatastormwascoming.即时练习Oneday_____________,hetoldallthevillagerstoprepareforthebadweather,butnoonebelievedhim._________,theweatherwasfine,sothevillagerssaidthattheyoungmanwaslyingagain._______theweathersuddenlychangedandastormwindcame.Allthevillagerstriedtosavethecropsbutitwastoolate.________,thestormruinedallthecrops.FinallyImmediatelyAtfirstThen
