高考作文的华丽变身•思考：•什么样的作文会成为一篇好作文•2.Hearingaterriblenoise,Tom,aseven-year-oldboy,whowaswatchingTVinthelivingroom,rushedoutimmediately,onlytofinditwasadaydream.•1.Tomisaboy.Heissevenyearsold.HewaswatchingTVinthelivingroom.Heheardaterriblenoise.Herushedoutimmediately.Hefounditwasjustadaydream•1.Tomisaboy.Heissevenyearsold.HewaswatchingTVinthelivingroom.Heheardaterriblenoise.Herushedoutimmediately.Hefounditwasjustadaydream2.Hearingaterriblenoise,Tom,aseven-year-oldboy,whowaswatchingTVinthelivingroom,rushedoutimmediately,onlytofinditwasadaydream什么样的作文会成为一篇好作文•准确完整表达信息点•表达句式丰富多样（1）高级词汇和恰当的词组（2）连接词和过渡词书面表达的五个步骤1.仔细审题（4确定）（1）体裁格式_________（2）题材内容_________（3）中心人称_________（4）主体时态_________•2.提炼要点，确定重点词汇•3.连词成句•4.组句成篇•5.检查誊写假设你是卜曼宜,你购买了一部某外国公司生产的手机.因有质量问题,要求该公司更换.请根据下列要点,用英文写一封电子邮件.1.问题:手机不响铃,不能发短信;该产品已售完,无法更换;型号新,无配件,无法维修.2.要求:公司应尽快予以更换.注意:1.词数为100左右;2.参考词汇:配件(sparepart)•Thestyle:•A.argumentative（议论文）•B.exposition（说明文）•C.narrative（记叙文）•Themainidea:•presenttheproblemswiththephone•askforachange•Person:•thefirstperson•Tense:•A.thepasttense•B.thepresenttense•C.thefuturetense2.提炼要点，确定重点词汇•不响铃•不能发短信•该产品已售完•无法更换•型号新•无配件•无法维修•要求应尽快予以更换Can’tringCan’tsendmessagesselloutchange…fornosparepartsfix/repairRequire/ask/requestsbtodosthAnewmodel/version3.连词成句•1.手机不响铃,不能发短信•2.该产品已售完,无法更换•3.型号新,无配件,无法维修•4.要求公司应尽快予以更换•Whatbothersmeisthequalityofthemobilephone.Theproblemsareasfollows:Tostartwith,notonlydoesitfailtoringbutalsoitcan’tsendamessage.Besides,thiskindofphonessellsowellthatnonecanbefoundatthemarket.Asaresult,Ican’tchangemyphoneforanewone.What’sworse,beingsuchanewproduct,thesparepartsofthephonearenotavailableatthemoment.Asaconsequence,itsimpossibletogetitchanged.Tosumup,whatIrequireisthatyoushouldgetmyphonechangedassoonaspossible.Pleasefinishthecomposition•假如你是一名高三学生。请根据以下要点给CHINADAILY写一篇英语短文，谈谈你对高三生活的想法。•1．对获得的帮助表示感谢•2．消除与同学之间的误会•3．努力学习，实现人生梦想•4．对学弟、学妹的建议•注意：1.可适当加入细节，以使行文连贯；•2．短文的单词数：100左右(开头已给出的单词不计入单词总数)•Highschoolisregardedasthebesttimeinaperson'slife.Asasenior3student,itwon'ttakelongbeforeIgraduate.
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