写作提升(一)---记叙文记叙文为高考书面表达重点考查体裁之一,记叙文以记人、叙事、描写景物为主要内容,通常用第一人称和第三人称,其时态也常用过去时态。叙述时应注意目的明确,重点突出以及事情的完整性与顺序性。【典题示例】【2011曲阜模拟】你今年暑假到一家肯德基(KFC)/麦当劳(McDonald’s)快餐店做保洁员(cleaner)工作。你每天工作七个小时,为期3周。这项工作辛苦且枯燥,你感到非常疲劳,几乎半途而弃。每天你都要起早贪黑的工作。在新学期开始之前,你终于完成了这项工作,并由此认识到了劳动的意义。你认为这是一次成功的体验。注意:1.必须使用第一人称;2.词数120左右。【审题谋篇】1.本篇为记叙文,为常考体裁,目的为通过在快餐店打工的经历说明劳动的意义。2.人称:第一人称3.时态和语态:打工经历------一般过去时态体会感想------一般现在时态4.写作要点:①说明打工的缘由。②阐述打工经历与感受。③体会打工的收获,即劳动的意义。【常用模板】.Ⅰ格式模板:开头:Duringthesummerholidays,Ithought…正文:Thejobwas…andIhadto…everyday.结尾:Iunderstand...,andit’sreally....Ⅱ句式模板:1.陈述计划、打算:Want/intend/prefertodosth.①Ratherthando/Insteadofdoing…,…prefertodo.②2.体现工作艰辛:findthejobhard/boring/endless①It’ssotiringthat…②【尝试运用】1.我想我应该做一些有意义的事情,而不是呆在家里无所事事。IthoughtIshoulddosomethingmeaningful.andIdon’twanttostayathome.(合并为一个句子)IthoughtIshoulddosomethingmeaningfulinsteadofstayingathome.2.这份工作辛苦、枯燥,这使我很疲惫,几乎中途放弃。一般表达方法:Ifeltverytiredandalmostgaveituphalfway,becausethejobwashardandboring.高级表达方式:Thejobwashardandboring,whichmademesotiredthatInearlygaveituphalfway.3.我明白了劳动的意义,认为这是一次成功经历。【佳文点睛】(连接词挖空)Duringthesummerholidaysthisyear,IthoughtIshoulddosomethingmeaningfulinsteadofstayathome,soIgotajobataKFCfastfoodrestaurant/anMcDonald'sandworkedthereasacleaner.Iworkedsevenhoursadayforthreeweeks.Thejobwashardandboringandseemedendless,whichmademesotiredthatInearlygaveituphalfway.Afterall,Istucktoitwithdetermination.EverydayIstudiedforworkearlyinthemorningandgothomelateintheevening.Finally,Ifinishedthejobbeforethenewtermbegan.Now,Iunderstandwhatlabourmeans,Ithinkitisreallyasuccessfulexperience.【跟踪演练】王太太决定带儿子去北京旅游,儿子听到后很是高兴,可是当他们准备出发时,突然发现一个问题,聪明的儿子想出一个主意……请根据这六幅图,用英语概述这一经过。注意:1.文章要包括六幅图中所有要点。2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯3.词数120左右。【参考范文】Mrs.WangdecidedtomakeatriptoBeijing.Whenshetoldhersonaboutherdecision,hewassooverjoyedthathejumpedupanddown.Theybegantopacktheirluggage.Whenthedaycame,thesonbecameworried,fornobodywouldtakecareofhisflower.Itwoulddieifitwasnotwatered.Suddenlyagoodideacametohismind.“Mum,”hesaidtohismother,“Wecanuseapieceofclothtotakecareoftheflower.”Heshowedhismotherwhathemeantbyputtingoneendoftheclothintothebasin,Iunderstandwhatlabourmeans,andthinkitreallyasuccessfulexperience.fullofwater,andotherendintotheflowerpot.Fivedayslater,whentheycamebackfromBeijing,theflowerwasstillaliveandevenstartedtoblossom.写作提升(二)---议论文议论文是高考书面表达常考体裁,文章以议论为主,通过摆事实、讲道理的方法,对客观事物进行评述或议论,以阐明作者的观点与主张,说服别人。议论文在内容上必须有论点、论据和论证三要素,在结构上要有引子、正文和结论三部分。【典题示例】针对城市街道上出现的越来越多的宠物,21stCenturyTeens向你约稿,请你谈谈你校学生对“城市内是否可以饲养宠物”的看法。经过详细...