高分作文标志 1：四级 120-150 字;六级 150—180 字; 2、与否长短句交叉; 3、用词与否恰当，精确，形象，尽量使用可以吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词; 4、关键词与否换用，切勿老用反复词; 下面给出写好一篇作文的注意事项： 1.合适用被动替代积极，这样能更客观的反应事实,句子开头不要总是用 we / I (例如写结尾时不用 we should pay attention to 而用 Attention should be paid to. )举个经典结尾六月六级作文的最终一段：It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. Thus ， its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively. 2.善于使用插入语，例如说把副词、连接词等，作插入语放在中间，一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。 如 however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入语放在中间，一般放在动词，助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。 例如说：Other individuals, however, take the attitude that… 3.一定要学会换词，换形象，详细的替代太宽泛的。(考试中一般不要出现 good, bad , many, thing, think, people, opinion 等等)例如上面例子中，applicable 替代 proper, approaches 替代 ways, implement 替 代 carry out, sharpen one’s competitive edge 替 代enhance one’s competitiveness(提高某物竞争力) 下面举一篇我南京六级班上一位同学写的优秀作文(14 分)的例子，看看他是怎样运用各类写作技巧的。这位同学把老师上课讲的各类写作手法和精彩替代和句型都用上了，作文有了很大的提高。 Computer and I By Simmy I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me. exceedingly 替代 very thrilling 替代 exciting sth. exert a tremendous fascination on sb 替代 sb. be interested in sth. google 替代 sear...
